Noah's Fanfic Reviews

The Calm before the Storm.

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Chapter 1-3

These three chapters were quite interesting, but seemed if anything very cliche.Written in 3rd person, Eric has married Sookie and has persuaded her to leave her life and live with him, taking a job as the mistress of Fangtasia etc….. Later on Sookie finds out she is pregnant and is carrying Erics child. Although in the actual episodes this is highly unlikely, it's a storyline that would go well with Team Eric fans.What I liked about this was that it was written extremely well. The grammar was also quite good, considering you find a lot of spelling and grammatical errors on fan fiction.I was extremely disappointed that the writer did not play with the story-line a little more, and it just seemed almost like a copy of twilight, yet a lot more grittier. I found the idea of Sookie being pregnant to Eric to out of context, and to close to the storyline of twilight.

In Another life, a Harry Potter fanfic.

This fanfic, was strangely intriguing it had the right combination of suspense and mystery. The story surrounds Severus Snape and what would of happened if he had killed himself and Harry Potter .The most interesting twist to thischapter is that Severus wakes up in a parallel universe, and to his astonishment he is married to the love of his life Lily( Harry Potters mother), and has a daughter to her.This story felt more like a Severus fan fulfilling his/hers dreams of finally seeing Severus with the love of his life Lily, and there isn't much in the way of Magic. I personally believe that the pure awesomeness of Severus is that he is this dark evil almost gothic character in the books and that by giving him a happy ending, it almost seems a little wrong. Even so the story was extremely sweet, and definitely left you wanting to read more purely out curiosity. Sadly though there is no other chapters

The Stranger At the Bottom Of The Garden (Edward Sisscorhands and Alice in Wonderland)

Such a cute story!. This story combined together the vivid imagery of Wonderland, and the odd characteristics of Edward Sissorhand's. In this Fanfic it shows life after the conquering of the Queen of Hearts and the restoration of Wonderland. Alice has decided to stay in the' under land', and here she encounters Edward in the woods…..The great thing about this story was that the combination worked very,very well. In a way it worked so well because both Edward and Alice are such innocent characters. It was extremely well written. The only disappointment was that there wasn't more to the story, and although it was a sweet ending It left me a little dissatisfied. I really believe their would be a lot of potential in this story, and their were so many possible twists just waiting to be told!. The writer mentioned that Edward was very similar to the Mad Hatter. And wrote how alice could see a connection. I found this clever as they are played by the same actor and this opened so much potential for the story. I found it smart because both characters are quite extreme yet in two completely contrasting ways. And that if not for the physical similarities they are quite opposite, which made it believable that they could be brothers. This made me want to read more!!!

The Forbidden destiny Chapter 1 - The beginning of A New Era.

This Fanfic was written in First person and is a crossover between Harry Potter and Alice and Wonderland. After reading a few fanfics on Alice and Wonderland, I knew that I had to find a cross-over with Harry Potter.Sadly though I was slightly disappointed in this story because it was so messy. The story consists of Draco Malfoy being turned into a vampire by Lord Dracula, after the defeat of Voldemort by Harry Potter. I found this story very choppy. I thought that the 'idea' behindthe story was a lot more intriguing then the first chapter itself. Although their is so much potential especially for a romance possibly between Alice and Draco.I found it a little confusing to read as you couldn't quite tell what was happening. I also happened to read some reviews and found out that twilight is also included in some of the chapters. This was a tad disappointing as i'm not a big fan of twilight, and felt that it would make otherwise a great idea, a little tacky.

Her Dark Secret - A Harry Potter Fanfic.

Written in 3rd Person this fanfic is about Draco and Hermione. Draco is on the run from the dark lord. and Dumbledore, Snape, and Mcgonagall decide that the safest place for him to take refugee is with Hermione Granger, A muggle, and an obvious enemy of his.The thing that I liked the most about this fanfic is that it was able to hold onto the 'personalities' of each character exceptionally well. I also found it humorous and not annoyingly humorous, but quite witty. I could imagine a lot of snapes one liners in the actual books. Overall it was light reading that left you curiously wanting to find out more, and has the potential to be very addictive.