Half blood (?)
NOTE: I've yet to write up a good intro...
In saying that I have no problem with the whole marriage thing – it really makes no difference that I intend to spend the rest of my life with him. Mrs. Cullen, I don’t mind the sound of that at all.
What worries me are the disapproving looks I’ll get from Jacob and Charlie…but they’ll have to get used to it seeing I’m going to be with Edward forever (as in becoming immortal so literally FOREVER).
Speaking of Jake I agreed to have one last hang out with him before I tie the knot with Edward which just means a one way ticket to the “pale faces”.
Right now though I have a wedding to plan apparently, waiting for Alice to negotiate flower arrangements and seating plans..ugh…
“Hey Bella, Where’s Alice?” As Rosalie enters the room you can instantly smell her distinctive perfume as it quickly fills the room.
“I’m not sure, I’m waiting for her to organise wedding…stuff” I reply quickly as Rose’s presence always seem to intimidate me.
I know Rose has this effect on people with her beauty – but today she is looks exceptionally breathtaking, my eyes are fixed onto her like a predator preying on her features ready to pounce any second. I’ve found myself getting anxious and nervous – this is so strange.
“What are you looking at? Rosalie snaps me out of this euphoric state.
I hesitate “N…nothing, sorry”.
“Well, let me know when Alice is around” She demands walking out of the room.
My heart is still beating faster than ever – much like the first time I saw Edward…
Confused and trying to comprehend what just took place Alice startles me with her trolley of flowers, “BELLA!” – As she goes to take a seat next to mine she freezes into a trance, she’s having a vision.
Her facial expression shows confusion as her forehead creases and eyes in despair.
“What, what did you see??” I ask impatiently.
“Rosalie…she’s furious…at someone – I can’t quite make out whom, but it’s a woman. She’s yelling and screaming at her. It was frightening”.
My heart thuds once again as I hear Rosalie’s name.
“Why is she so angry?” Curious as if it has some relation to me.
“I don’t know. It was obscure. I’ve never seen Rosalie that angry for the period I’ve know her”.
Alice’s vision unresolved we settled with the agreement it had something to do with Emmett and moved onto the wedding planning, though the whole time all I could think of was Rose – Alice’s vision and my encounter with her earlier.
I met up with Edward briefly before it was time to hang with Jake. Edward had already seen what Alice had seen of course and he seemed to have brushed it off with the same theory we decided upon with Emmett. He admitted attempting to read Rosalie’s mind but he failed to do so only retrieving a blurred train of thoughts. I suggested a werewolf was involved as Alice’s vision seems to cut off with the interference of werewolves – but he didn’t buy the idea so I dropped it.
I reach Jake’s place with an unsettling, almost apprehensive feeling leeched onto me since I left the Cullen’s.
“Hey Bella”
I swear Jake is on steroids with how buff he looks every time we meet.
“Hey Jake, been working out?” I laugh.
“You know me ha-ha” He joins me in laughter and then initiates a greeting hug then realises “Whoa Bells, do you have a fever or something? Your body temperature is abnormally high” Jake asks me worried.
“Not that I know of” I reply surprised.
“It’s like extreme” Jake states.
Quick streams of thoughts rush through my head; mainly revolving around Rosalie.
Trying not to expose my thoughts I tell Jake “I feel fine; I’ve had a weird day though”.
“I think we should get you to a hospital, this is way out of the norm” Jake insists.
“Seriously Jake, I’m fine”
“No I’m SERIOUS Bella – let's go” His voice raised he grabs my arm dragging me in the direction of my truck.
This fanfiction is nicely written. it seems really natural as well which is a good thing for a dialogue focused story to be.
ReplyDeletea couple of sentences could be ammended:
"my eyes are fixed onto her like a predator preying on her features ready to pounce any second"
maybe needs a fullstop after 'predator'???
other than that a very nicely written fanfiction!
Your story is well written and Bella's voice comes through throughout the text. Very open ending could leave the reader wanting more or frustrated.
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